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In the following question, out of the four alternatives, select the alternative which will improve the underlined part of the sentence. In case no improvement is needed, select “No improvement”

My old teacher gave many poor students money in spite of he was poor.

This question was previously asked in
NDA I 2016 GAT Previous Year Paper (17-Apr-2016)
The correct answer is

Even though

Improving Sentence Structure with Conjunctions

The original sentence is "My old teacher gave many poor students money in spite of he was poor." We need to examine the underlined part, "in spite of he was poor," to see if it is grammatically correct and if one of the alternatives provides a better structure.

The phrase "in spite of" is a prepositional phrase used to show a contrast or concession. It is typically followed by a noun, pronoun, or a gerund (the -ing form of a verb acting as a noun). For example:

  • In spite of the rain, we went for a walk. (followed by a noun)
  • In spite of being tired, she finished the work. (followed by a gerund)
  • In spite of him, they succeeded. (followed by a pronoun)

In the given sentence, "in spite of he was poor" is followed by a clause ("he was poor"). This is not the correct usage of "in spite of". Therefore, the underlined part needs improvement.

Analyzing the Alternatives for Sentence Improvement

Let's look at the provided options to find the correct replacement:

  1. Even though: This is a conjunction that means "despite the fact that". It is used to introduce a subordinate clause that contrasts with the main clause. It fits the structure of connecting a clause ("he was poor") to the main part of the sentence ("My old teacher gave many poor students money"). The sentence "My old teacher gave many poor students money even though he was poor" is grammatically correct and clearly conveys the intended meaning – the teacher's action (giving money) happened despite his poverty.
  2. As if: This phrase is used to describe how something seems or appears, often suggesting it is not true. For example, "He acts as if he knows everything." It does not express the idea of contrast between two factual situations (giving money and being poor).
  3. However: This is a conjunctive adverb used to connect two independent clauses or sentences. It shows contrast. For example, "He was poor; however, he gave money to students." Or "He was poor. However, he gave money to students." It cannot replace "in spite of he was poor" directly within the original sentence structure as a subordinate conjunction.
  4. No improvement: As established, the original phrase "in spite of he was poor" is grammatically incorrect. Thus, improvement is needed.

Conclusion on Sentence Improvement

Based on the analysis, "Even though" is the correct alternative to replace the underlined phrase and make the sentence grammatically sound while maintaining the intended meaning of contrast between the teacher's generosity and his own financial state.

Revision Table: Conjunctions and Prepositions of Contrast

Term Type Usage Structure Example
In spite of / Despite Prepositional Phrase + noun / pronoun / gerund In spite of the cold, she went out.
Despite being late, he started.
Despite him, they won.
Even though / Although / Though Subordinating Conjunction + clause (subject + verb) Even though it was cold, she went out.
Although he was late, he started.
Though he was against them, they won.
However Conjunctive Adverb Connects independent clauses; needs semicolon or period before it, often comma after it. It was cold; however, she went out.
He was late. However, he started.

Additional Information: Understanding Subordinate Clauses

A subordinate clause (also called a dependent clause) is a clause that cannot stand alone as a complete sentence because it does not express a complete thought. It contains a subject and a verb but depends on an independent clause to make sense. Subordinate clauses are often introduced by subordinating conjunctions, such as "even though," "although," "because," "since," "when," "while," etc.

In the corrected sentence, "even though he was poor" is a subordinate clause introduced by the conjunction "even though." It adds information about the circumstances under which the teacher gave money but cannot function as a standalone sentence.

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