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In the following question, out of the four alternatives, select the alternative which will improve the underlined part of the sentence. In case no improvement is needed, select “No improvement”.

While we would like that all Indian children  to go to school, we need to ponder why they do not.

This question was previously asked in
NDA II 2015 GAT Previous Year Paper (16-Dec-2015)
The correct answer is

all Indian children

Understanding Sentence Improvement and Grammatical Structures

The question asks us to identify the best way to improve the underlined part of the sentence: "While we would like that all Indian children to go to school, we need to ponder why they do not." We need to analyze the grammatical structure involving the verb "like".

Analyzing the Original Sentence Structure

The phrase "like that all Indian children to go" uses the structure "like that [noun phrase] to [verb]". This structure is generally considered ungrammatical in standard English when expressing a desire for someone to do something. The common and correct structure after "like" in this context is "like [noun phrase] to [verb]".

For example:

  • Incorrect: I would like that you to finish your homework.
  • Correct: I would like you to finish your homework.

Similarly, in our sentence, the inclusion of "that" after "like" is incorrect.

Evaluating the Improvement Options

Let's examine each provided option:

  1. Option 1: that all the Indian children

    This option replaces "that all Indian children  to go to school" with "that all the Indian children". If we insert this into the original sentence, it becomes "While we would like that all the Indian children to go to school...". This still retains the incorrect "that" after "like" and changes "Indian children" to "the Indian children", which doesn't fix the primary grammatical error. The structure remains incorrect.

  2. Option 2: if all the children of India

    This option replaces the underlined part, potentially leading to "While we would like if all the children of India to go to school...". Using "if" after "like" in this context fundamentally changes the meaning or makes the sentence awkward and grammatically incorrect. "Like if..." typically introduces a hypothetical situation, not a desire for something to happen.

  3. Option 3: all Indian children

    This option replaces the underlined part, resulting in "While we would like all Indian children to go to school...". The complete sentence becomes "While we would like all Indian children to go to school, we need to ponder why they do not." This sentence uses the correct grammatical structure "like [noun phrase] to [verb]", which is "like all Indian children to go". This structure correctly expresses the desire for all Indian children to go to school.

  4. Option 4: No improvement

    As analyzed earlier, the original sentence contains a grammatical error with the structure "like that... to go". Therefore, improvement is needed.

Conclusion on Sentence Improvement

Comparing the options, only option 3 corrects the grammatical error in the original sentence by removing the unnecessary and incorrect word "that". It results in a grammatically sound and natural-sounding sentence.

Revision Table: Comparing Options

Option Proposed Improvement Resulting Structure Grammatical Correctness
Original that all Indian children  to go to school like that [NP] to [Verb] Incorrect
1 that all the Indian children like that [NP] to [Verb] Incorrect (retains 'that')
2 if all the children of India like if [NP] to [Verb] Incorrect/Awkward
3 all Indian children like [NP] to [Verb] Correct
4 No improvement - Original is incorrect

Additional Information: Verb Structures with "Like"

The verb "like" can be followed by different structures depending on the intended meaning:

  • Like + Noun/Pronoun: Expressing preference for something. Example: "I like coffee."
  • Like + Gerund (-ing): Expressing enjoyment of an activity in general. Example: "I like swimming."
  • Like + Infinitive (to + verb): Expressing that something is a good idea or a habit, or sometimes a preference for a specific action. Example: "I like to swim in the morning."
  • Would like + Noun/Pronoun: Expressing a polite request or desire for something specific. Example: "I would like a glass of water."
  • Would like + Infinitive (to + verb): Expressing a specific desire or intention. Example: "I would like to go home now."
  • Would like + Object + Infinitive (to + verb): Expressing a desire for someone else to do something. Example: "I would like you to help me." This is the structure relevant to the question, confirming that "would like [noun phrase] to [verb]" is correct, and "would like that [noun phrase] to [verb]" is not.

Understanding these different structures is crucial for correct sentence construction and grammar improvement.

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