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Direction: Look at the underlined part of each sentence. Below each sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of them, a), b) or c), is better than the underlined part, indicate your response on the Answer Sheet against the corresponding letter a), b) or c). If none of the substitutions improve the sentence, indicate d) as your response on the Answer Sheet. Thus a ‘No improvement’ response will be signified by the letter d).

The more they earn, more they spend .

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NDA II 2015 GAT Previous Year Paper (16-Dec-2015)
The correct answer is

The more they earn, the more they spend

Analyzing the Sentence Structure for Improvement

The question asks us to examine the underlined part of the sentence, "The more they earn, more they spend.", and choose the best substitution from the given options or indicate that no improvement is needed.

The original sentence is:

"The more they earn, more they spend."

This sentence attempts to express a proportional relationship: as earning increases, spending also increases. This type of construction in English uses a specific grammatical structure involving comparative forms.

Understanding the "The More... The More" Structure

The standard structure used to show that something increases or decreases in proportion to something else is "The + comparative adjective/adverb + clause, the + comparative adjective/adverb + clause."

Examples:

  • The higher you climb, the colder it gets.
  • The faster you finish, the sooner you can rest.
  • The less you worry, the happier you will be.

In this structure, 'The' acts like a demonstrative adverb modifying the comparative, indicating 'by how much'. Both parts of the structure require 'the' followed by the comparative.

Evaluating the Original Sentence

The original sentence is "The more they earn, more they spend."

It uses "The more they earn" correctly for the first part. However, the second part is "more they spend", which is missing the necessary article "the" before "more". Therefore, the original sentence is grammatically incorrect and requires improvement.

Examining the Options for Sentence Improvement

Let's look at the provided substitution options:

  1. More they earn, more they spend
  2. More they earn, the more they spend
  3. The more they earn, the more they spend
  4. No improvement

We will analyze each option based on the correct "the + comparative, the + comparative" structure:

  • Option 1: More they earn, more they spend
    This option is missing "the" before both "more they earn" and "more they spend". This does not follow the required structure.
  • Option 2: More they earn, the more they spend
    This option is missing "the" before "more they earn" in the first part, although it correctly uses "the more they spend" in the second part. It does not follow the required structure for both parts.
  • Option 3: The more they earn, the more they spend
    This option uses "The more they earn" for the first part and "the more they spend" for the second part. This perfectly matches the correct "the + comparative, the comparative" structure used to show proportional change.
  • Option 4: No improvement
    As we established that the original sentence "The more they earn, more they spend." is grammatically incorrect due to the missing "the" in the second part, this option is not correct. Improvement is needed.

Conclusion on Sentence Improvement

Comparing the options, only option 3, "The more they earn, the more they spend", correctly applies the grammatical rule for expressing a proportional relationship using the "the + comparative, the + comparative" structure.

Therefore, the best substitution to improve the sentence is "The more they earn, the more they spend".

Sentence Part Original Option 1 Option 2 Option 3 Correct Structure
First Clause The more they earn More they earn More they earn The more they earn The more they earn
Second Clause more they spend more they spend the more they spend the more they spend the more they spend
Correctness Incorrect (missing 'the' in 2nd clause) Incorrect (missing 'the' in both clauses) Incorrect (missing 'the' in 1st clause) Correct Correct

Revision Table: Comparative Structures

Structure Usage Example
Comparative Adjective/Adverb (-er, more) Comparing two things He is taller than his brother.
She speaks more fluently now.
Superlative Adjective/Adverb (-est, most) Comparing three or more things (best/worst) He is the tallest in the class.
She performed the most brilliantly.
The + Comparative, The + Comparative Showing proportional change between two things The harder you work, the luckier you get.
The less you eat, the more weight you lose.

Additional Information: Adverbial Clauses of Proportion

The structure "the + comparative, the + comparative" functions as an adverbial clause indicating proportion. The first part, "The more they earn," acts as an adverbial clause modifying the second part, "the more they spend," showing how the spending increases as the earning increases.

These clauses are often separated by a comma. The verb can sometimes be omitted if it is clear from the context (e.g., The more, the merrier - 'the more people there are, the merrier it is'). However, in standard sentences like the one in the question, the full clause with subject and verb is typically used.

Understanding these specific comparative structures is crucial for accurate and fluent English usage, especially when expressing relationships of proportion or degree.

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